In my book, Driven: A Rita Mars Thriller, my protagonist, Rita Mars searches for the killer responsible for her fellow reporter, Bobby Ellis’s death. She determined there was a political target of the story that got him killed and immediately began the search through available sources as to which groups he might have been investigating and who were their members.
She started at the Federal Election Commission. The FEC maintains a searchable database on its website; the Center for Responsive Politics maintains its own website — opensecrets.org — which is designed to be more user-friendly and includes analysis of FEC data.
For state level races, there is followthemoney.org, a joint project of the National Institute on Money and Politics and the Campaign Finance Institute. The site claims its database documents more than $100 billion in contributions, and more than 2 million lobbyist relationships per year.
Other sites will allow you to drill down at the local level. The Virginia Public Access Project has a database on money and politics including local elections in that state. In California, the nonprofit group MapLight includes data about state and local races on its website, as well as information about national campaign finance. Disclosure requirements vary by state and locality and the federal government offers an online directory.
Even with these multi-level sources, Rita found no easy task. Why?
First, many object to disclosure laws because they believe that such requirements impinge on First Amendment freedoms of speech and association in spite of the Bipartisan Campaign Reform Act of 2002 (BCRA).
Secondly, the Supreme Court determined that disclosure reporting need not occur until the minimum threshold financials provided in the BCRA are triggered. The goal was to ensure that only truly serious candidates would be affected by the disclosure requirements.
And then there are the gaping holes:
Groups that spend $12,499 or less in a quarter need not disclose
Outside contractors hired by organizations to lobby have to report work billed at more than $3,000 in a quarter – but that reporting still doesn’t show a full and accurate total.
The most significant level of underreporting is generally attributed to a carve-out in the law that allows some highly-paid political operatives to avoid disclosing any of their lobbying activities. The law is based on semantics and former office holders label themselves “advisors.” This permits them to avoid registering as lobbyists and so gives them exemption from reporting.
General meetings with special interest groups need not report their sessions or monies spent in conjunction.
In reporting meetings with office holders or government officials, lobbyists indicate only agency or branch of government, not individual names and titles.
There is no accountability or reporting of retired government officials or office holders as to their lobbying of their former agency of employment
The trail Rita followed is long, convoluted and difficult to find. First, she “fingerprinted” her potential suspects, expanding their profile with contacts, family members and other organizations to which they have contributed. What is the fingerprinting Rita did? She utilized best practices of criminal investigation link analysis and social media analysis. These are complex methods and the links I have provided will give you an excellent overview.
From the fingerprint data, Rita categorized each individual or corporation to determine a similarity to Bobby Ellis’s story. This exercise led her to her short list for in-depth investigation. When you read the book, you’ll see how her search took her down the right path.
SO – as a hard-core fan of mystery, thrillers and all things where I’m trying to figure out who the bad guy is and how to stop them, I rifle through Netflix and Amazon Prime as well as the world of books. I suspect you do the same.
For the build of suspense and the sheer tension of sharply conflicted characters, experience WISTING. You will be rewarded. Dialogue is spare but effective. You get the profile of each character clearly within seconds of introduction. You’re wary of them all. No, they’re not the perps but you instantly recognize there are hidden agendas – subtle but potentially contrary to cooperative detecting.
Just as the folk you work with yourself, you’re going to feel that push back from those who see the situation through a different lens and want to impose their approach on the case at hand. Yes, sometimes, you’ll see that studied frozen stare of recognition and think “deer in the headlights?” Just keep going.
True thriller storylines unwind across the magnificent Norwegian landscape. The two series on ACORN TV are based on novels by former police detective Jorn Lier Horst. His Detective Chief Inspector, William Wisting, is played by Sven Nordin. You may have seen him before in Valkyrien and Lilyhammer.
Wisting is head of homicide at Larvik police station, a small town just outside Oslo. Series one is comprised of 10 episodes, telling two stories which have been adapted from Lier Horst’s novels The Caveman and The Hunting Dogs – with five episodes apiece.
Watch the trailer. Decide for yourself. I’m betting you’ll opt in.
Reading Experience – There’s a reason Cara Malone maintains high rankings on Amazon. Her books are expressive and have strong clarity. The reader will find her narrative easy to follow the action and to differentiate characters.
Characters – If you like strong women who are not unrelentingly hard-boiled, you’ll love her series protagonist, Mel Pine, a disciplined police officer who gets her shot on solo patrol. Perfect job for the loner that she is. Still, she’s not so lone wolf that she is not caring.
Mel is the loving caretaker for her ailing grandmother. Equally attractive is the eager and less edgy, Court Wilson. She’s young brave; she’s open; she’s willing to take her chances.
Author Malone draws her secondary characters with no less a finer pen. Especially well done is Nonna, Mel’s grandmother who brings A-game strength to her battle with cancer. Malone clearly gives each of the secondaries a unique personality with specific individual motivations.
Story – The story line on the main plot is the murder/cover-up. The reader gets a clear line of action towards solving the case. Conflicts in the case arise and Mel and Court doggedly pursue the obstacles in the way. No machina ex deus here! True detective and police work take the reader to its natural conclusion.
The secondary storyline is the increasing attraction between Mel and Court. The reader experiences the tension between the two. The reluctance, the bonding, the danger of the case spins the two into a believable romance.
Specs Pages: 234 Lending: Enabled Available: Kindle, Paperback Recommendation Get it. Read it. As we said in the beginning – there’s a reason Cara Malone maintains high rankings on Amazon! https://amzn.to/2TpgNCk
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Wattpad Books announces “W by Wattpad Books,” a new adult imprint to bring more stories to bookshelves – and to expand the field of opportunity for writers.
With five commercial fiction and romance novels planned at launch, the first “W by Wattpad Books” title will debut on February 1, 2022 with Lockdown on London Lane by bestselling author Beth Reekles.
The novel marks Beth Reekles’ return to Wattpad after a stream of incredible success in publishing and entertainment.